Friday, November 16, 2007

Are you to hard to be real?

You don't have to forget to believe
because your doubt makes it seem unreal.
My fist confide all secrets
with the stories that can only be told through
silence.
Teach what is known learn what is not.
I control my life because i only have one.

3 comments:

sunnyskys987 said...

awesome piece. i love the line 'my fist confide(s)? all secrets. the last line closes it out well. good job. :)

_thrive said...

'You don't have to forget to believe'
i really like that.

Joker Rose said...

i like the fact that this is told as a demaninding factor a factor that demands control of life itself but only to ones own life and not control over everyones life